Poem

Cookie

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Endurance

Pushing and shoving for most of my life,
Running out of places to hide the pain, the heartache,
Now it flows, slowly, out of my mouth like an unnoticed poison,
Will you notice it?

Crying on the inside,
The noise will never penetrate stone,
My heart diminishes,
Losing hope, becoming empty and hollow

Life, like sunshine, is bright and made for happiness and joy,
As light is hidden and clouded,
With darkness comes pain,
Do you feel it?

My weakening makes an appearance,
Few tears start to drop, while more yearn to pour,
The thoughts begin crawling through my mind,
The feeling of insanity is at my door

How much more can be done?
How much, before blood starts to shed?
With the feeling of loneliness intensifying,
Only dreams are left floating in my head

Hoping time will claim my sanity,
I cannot escape,
This is my reality

No giving up,
Determined I will stand,
My faith I put in God?s hands

By: Nahren S. (Cookie)
? 2006
 
Cookie your poems are AMAZING. GREAT job.
Keep them coming and keep up doing this you are really talented.
You know how to catch ppl with your poems.

:D
 
Aww, thank you so much Candle and GodIsMyJudge, I very much appreciate it! \
I wrote this over a period of time, when I ha spurts of inspiration, it's just how I've been feeling lately! :blush:
You all are always so very nice to me.  God Bless and Take care! xoxo  :bigarmhug:

-Cookie
 
Wonderfully worded Cookie...

I hope to see a progression in your poetry...from the drak to light...it's bound to happen when you have Endurance and God

:bigarmhug:
 
Aww Renee, thank you doosha.  :blush:  I very much appreciate your kindness!

lol.... Well I dunno about the transistion, but hopefully one day everything will all fall into place. God Willing!

MWAHS :bigarmhug: :kiss:
-Cookie
 
Mostyyyy Thank you so much azista!!  That means a lot to me :blush:
Your kindness is much appreciated sweets!! :wink: 
Writing is a favourite outlet of mine, I will definitely bring you guys new material when the opportunity arises!!  :mrgreen:
 
Aww Carro, thank you so much cakes.  I appreciate the time taken to read my poem and leave a lovely comment!
Merci!! :bigarmhug:
 
Oh wow, you all have been so wonderful, THANK YOU!

Aww atourina, thank you so much azisiti, that means a lot to me!!  :bigarmhug:  MWAHSSSSS :winkkiss:

-Cookie :wink:
 
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