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I hide away to a place where no one can hurt me,
I sink into the music and melody of the song so I can be in peace

The day is sunny and bright to the eye,
But underneath like a sharp blade, painful to the touch

At first glance all seems cheery, almost normal,
Yet in the shadows is where you lurk, and truth becomes life

Just when you think things have turned for the better and you reach for relaxation,
You are snapped back into cruel reality, where unkind faces and malicious words surround your every breath

Trying to keep the distance between what makes you smile and what makes you cry,
Holding on to the ounce of warmth that keeps you going, before fading into the cold actuality that surrounds us called life.

By: Nahren S. (Cookie)
? 2005
 
Wow! I'm sincerely moved by it...because this how i feel right now :( ...thank u azizta for sharing.... :thumbup: :rose:
 
that was a great poem it really felt inside...ure very good at writing poems coookie :bigarmhug:
 
Candle, Carro and JooJee, THANK YOU SO MUCH! Guys I really appreciate you all taking the time to read my poetry, I really appreciate it!! xoxo MWAHS!! :bigarmhug: :2hearts: :kiss:
 
By far -this is one of the best poems you have written Cookie.I can really relate to it ,Basma janakh azizta :)
 
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