My Latest Poem...

Cookie

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Hi Everyone :)

My Latest Poem.... I hope you all like it, I wrote this sometime last month:) ... Take care and God Bless...
- Always Cookie

P.S. Fleo is Latin and roughly defined, means to "To Weep"
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Fleo

You care but you do not follow
You smile but the only thing that gleams is ice
As a daily routine continues
My soul will burn in agony
My tears drop and no one to catch them

The ones that care are far but close to my heart
The ones who claim to be part of your whole,
Are the ones that shatter you entirely from within
My heart aches such pain
My mind going blank

My face falls into my hands
My body slowly drops to the ground
The tears flow like blood
The room spins around
All around me is empty
All the feelings into stone

You left me there alone
You thought you were simply the best
All that I've done, all that I can do now
Is utterly nothing to you
Is only dust in the wind

There is nothing left to be done
There is not much more to crush
The Acting, the "caring, can't last forever
You will not notice the way my smile has faded
You will not care to see how I will disappear

I am there, but cannot follow
I smile, so that it hides the pain
The daily routines will keep on going
My days in constant chaos
My life will never change.


By: Nahren S (Cookie)
?2005
 
OH! that made me tear a little, but seriously that was a great Poem...

thxx for sharing Cookie :flowers:
 
Awwwwwwwwww Thank You So Much Hun!

I really really appreciate your kind words... If You wanna read other's I've written, shout back :)

Take care and God Bless Dear...
xoxo - Cookie :mrgreen: :bigarmhug:
 
Cookie said:
Awwwwwwwwww Thank You So Much Hun!

I really really appreciate your kind words... If You wanna read other's I've written, shout back :)

Take care and God Bless Dear...
xoxo - Cookie :mrgreen: :bigarmhug:


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WOW!

BIG WOW!

Man this poem is damn good.
It reminds of something which happend in my own life.

You are GOOD! Damn GOOD.

Don't you have a book or something with all your poems. If so can i have a copie :D
 
Aw gosh, thank you so much GodIsMyJudge and Naramsin, you guys are too kind! Your kind words mean very much to me gentlemen!! Thank you!! :kiss: :kiss:

GodismyJudge said:
Don't you have a book or something with all your poems. If so can i have a copie :D

LOL God Is My Judge, I WISH I had a book hun lol.. Aside from my collection I keep lol if you'd like there was a link above with all my poems to date, and you are more then welcome to read them :) ...Inshalla maybe one day I can write a book hehe :mrgreen:

Thank You Again!! :bigarmhug:
 
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